Ella Domeier wears many titles, among them poet and sixth-grade student.
She recently earned a new one: published author.
Domeier’s poem, The Story of Sudan, was printed in Write Down the Middle, a literary journal featuring students’ work. Students can submit creative writing, poems and essays for the journal.
English and language arts teacher Ramona Jones entered Domeier’s poem based on a long walk to water.
“The best writing from my students I have read was the work Ella Domeier used to get accepted into Write Down the Middle,” Jones said.
Ella credited Ms. Jones for helping her perfect her writing and for her teaching.
“Ms. Jones has helped me become a better writer by teaching me new words and grammar,” Domeier said.
Domeier also said restrictions prevented more scholars from participating.
“One thing I would change about Write Down the Middle is that some of my friends had really great work,” Domeier said. “Teachers can only pick a certain amount of student work to submit.”
The Story of Sudan
Ella Domeier
The sun is hot in Southern Sudan’s land
But still Nya keeps walking with a large jug in her hand
Nya walks this path everyday
Carrying water instead of going outside to play
She keeps walking because people in her family are thirsty
The dirty water makes her sister weak
Just because of the brown, dirty pool where Nya seeks
Through heat, thorns and pebbles everyday
If her family wants water, Nya will be on her way
However, in the same place but at a different time
Young Salva is forced to flee because being a different religion is a crime
He ran away from his home, school, and village too
Walking to the refugee camps with a large crew
Holding on to his uncle’s hand
They walk together from land to land
After his uncle passed away
His phrase gets Salva to another day
Just one more step, that bush is all you have to go
And Salva and the group do, just very slow
Salva becomes a leader and leads the group to another camp
He got recruited and now his passport has a stamp
He flies to America, what a sight it is to see
But deep down in his heart he can’t let Southern Sudan’s problems be
Salva came back to Sudan
And built a well with the help of a man
This well helped many people, especially Nya’s tribe
She no longer had to make the long walk for water, which really helped her vibe
With the clean water, less people got sick
And people could get water ten times as quick
People from other villages walked miles to get clean water
And finally, with the help of brave citizens, people got water after a lot of manslaughter
